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 * About
 
-On this web server, I host a few personal services, publish my blog/personal-site, and I'll hopefully be hosting more public services as time goes on. I want a federated, simple, social internet built on Free software, and this is my small contribution.
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-This website has been made to be as accessible as possible. Using simple markup means I can write/publish quickly, and it produces a very small website of lightly-styled text that can easily be rendered by any low-spec computer and parsed via the eyes, through a translation service, or through a screen reader without hiccups. You can render and navigate the website without issue if your browser doesn't support Javascript, or even from a terminal-based browser like Lynx. This website does not discriminate traffic from VPN providers or mixnet exits, nor will it track your activity, serve you ads, or make your computer execute non-free software.
+Welcome to my spaceship. I host a few personal services here, publish a feed of notes and posts, and I'll hopefully be hosting many public services as time goes on. I want to participate in an intergalactic community--from the Salt Lake City area and out--slinging text files across the stars, organizing, and sharing our art/projects/speech.
 
 * My feed
 
-I post various posts and notes on [[https://skylarcloud.xyz/feed.html][my feed]]. For timely updates and more convenient viewing, you can add the [[https://skylarcloud.xyz/feed.xml][.xml feed]] to your RSS reader.
+I publish various posts and notes on [[https://skylarcloud.xyz/feed.html][my feed]]. For timely updates and likely more convenient viewing, you can add the [[https://skylarcloud.xyz/feed.xml][.xml feed]] to your RSS reader of choice.
 
 * SearXNG